小学作文范文：My Favourite FoodDo you know what this is?
Guess!
Its colour is yellow.
It’s long and thin.
It looks like a small boat and crescent.
Oh, it is a banana.
Do you know what that is?
Guess again!
Its colour is orange.
It’s round.
It looks like a small ball and a small lantern.
Oh, it is an orange.
I like then a lot.
I like ice-creams.
I like to chew gum.
Chocolates and candies are yummy.
I like them very much.
How about you?
What’s your favourite food?
【要遥点评】 My Favourite Food 是一篇很遥的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己较喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。
整篇文章用词遥、语言流畅、没有语法错误。
另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。