2015年6月英语六遥写作常见错误分析(11)作文在英语四六遥考试中占据百分之十五的比重，也是大家考前冲刺较有遥的一部分，此时不冲更待何时?
下面为大家整理了2015年6月大学英语六遥写作常见错误分析，供广大考生参考遥。
　　Exercise W2?
　　The following topic sentences are only examples.
Your sentences may be different.
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This is a strong topic sentence.
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　　2.
This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph 　　describes what the writer does when he or she goes to the beach.
A better topic sentence would be: Whenever I have the opportunity to go to the beach, I always follow the same routine.
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This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph describes the various ways students can get to class.
A better topic sentence would be: For the many students who cannot afford a car, there are several alternative ways of getting to class.
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　　Exercise W3 　　These are only examples.
Your topic sentences may be different.
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A dormitory room is cold and impersonal until several changes have been made to make it more inviting.
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　　2.
American telephone books are divided into several sections.
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　　3.
The fast-food restaurant has become popular for various reasons.
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