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雅思写作思路透析:是否该禁止不必要的航空旅行

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雅思写作思路透析:是否该禁止不必要的航空旅行  Topic:   A long-distance flight consumes the fuel as much as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars.
So some people think we should abandon the non-essential fights , and it is more efficient than restricting the car use.
Give your opinion about it.
  接下来分析一下这道题目,应该说上过我的作文课的学生会发现这次的题目不难写,因为我在课上重点分析过类似的题目。
从结构上来说,这个题目毫无疑问适合用三对一结构来进行写作。
以下为参考结构:   遥段:开头段   Introduce the topic   Statement   第二段:让步段   第三段:重点段   遥句:过渡句   第二句:分论点一   The practice potentially hinders the economic development in most countries.
  第三句: Theoretical Evidence   Abandonning non-essential flight-Employees in related fileds such as international tourist guides are likelty to become unemployed-Soaring unemployement rate-Economic development suffers   第四句: 分论点二   The practice is likely to bring about great financial disaster to some countries whose economy relies on tourism to a large extent.
  第五句:Case Evidence   可以以马尔代夫这样的遥为例。
  第六句: 分论点三   The practice is also likely to cost people much more time on traveling, especially to some business people who need constantly travel from place to place.
  第四段:结尾段   Summarize the nature of the practice-The problems outnumber the benefits   Restate the opinion-The practice is not a wise decision.