雅思写作思路透析:是否该禁止不必要的航空旅行 Topic:
A long-distance flight consumes the fuel as much as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon the non-essential fights , and it is more efficient than restricting the car use. Give your opinion about it.
接下来分析一下这道题目,应该说上过我的作文课的学生会发现这次的题目不难写,因为我在课上重点分析过类似的题目。 从结构上来说,这个题目毫无疑问适合用三对一结构来进行写作。 以下为参考结构:
遥段:开头段
Introduce the topic
Statement
第二段:让步段
第三段:重点段
遥句:过渡句
第二句:分论点一
The practice potentially hinders the economic development in most countries.
第三句: Theoretical Evidence
Abandonning non-essential flight-Employees in related fileds such as international tourist guides are likelty to become unemployed-Soaring unemployement rate-Economic development suffers
第四句: 分论点二
The practice is likely to bring about great financial disaster to some countries whose economy relies on tourism to a large extent.
第五句:Case Evidence
可以以马尔代夫这样的遥为例。
第六句: 分论点三
The practice is also likely to cost people much more time on traveling, especially to some business people who need constantly travel from place to place.
第四段:结尾段
Summarize the nature of the practice-The problems outnumber the benefits
Restate the opinion-The practice is not a wise decision.