英文写作中注意避遥只有其意，不见其形　　一篇好的文章不但内容丰富有条理，句子结构紧凑清楚，遣词用字更是恰到好处，引人入胜。
即使不能达到这样理想的境界，至少也要思路清晰、文字正确。
(来源：2HZZ常识网 http://www.
2hzz.
com) 　　下面四段出处不同的文字乖离了英语句法标准，必须更正。
　　先看遥段文字： 　　Fifteen years teaching experienced qualified full time tutor - Available for all levels Chinese subjects.
　　这段文字虽然措词凌乱，但是并不难理解讲的是什么；真的是 只有其意，不见其形或是有意无形。
稍微分析一下，不难断定问题所在。
　　㈠ 构词法不对：fifteen years→fifteen years of /15-year ；all levels→all levels of.
㈡ 名词形式不对：experienced→ experience.
㈢ 标点符号被忽略：full time→full-time.
　　修改后的句子合乎语法，但全句并不自然，要改写如下： 　　A qualified full-time tutor with 15 years of teaching experience is available for all levels of Chinese.
　　再看第二段文字： 　　All materials are good quality with latest design and guaranteed.
　　这段话的错误如下： 　　㈠ 形容词词组不对：good quality→of good quality.
㈡ 定冠词被忽略：with latest design→with the latest design.
㈢被动语态中的接系动词不在场：guaranteed→are guaranteed.
　　修正后的句子既正确又易解，但可以使它从对变好，如下： 　　All materials are of good quality, with the latest design and under permanent guarantee.
　　这里三个形容词词组，一个接一个，紧紧扣住，符合对句法（ parallelism）中每个成分平衡的原理。
　　较后，看看这段话： 　　To sell or to market such a high value asset professionally, you should entrust the job to a true professional in order to optimise your property's full potential to secure the highest price and the shortest period of time.
　　上面三个加线之处，都有语病。
　　㈠ high value→highly valued/ highly valuable.
㈡ your property's full potential→the full potential of your property.
㈢ and→at。
　　此外，㈡前面有optimise（尽量提高）这字，potential 里面的full便多余了，应该除去。
遥的道理，下面这句里的 widely和in more than 100 countries，也互相抵触，要除去其中一个： 　　.
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prepare students for the Royal School of Music Examination which is widely recognised in more than 100 countries.
　　改正之后，可以是which is widely recognised或which is recognised in more than 100 countries.
　　此外，这句的形容词分句which.
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是非限定的（ non-restrictive adjective clause），其前面要加逗号，把分句和先行词分开，才符合用法： 　　.
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prepare students for the Royal School of Music Examination, which is widely recognised 　　or 　　.
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prepare students for the Royal School of Music Examination, which is recognised in more than 100 countries.